First of all, I want to start out and say thank you to the those who read my essay and gave the comments during the workshop in class friday. What you wrote was very helpful to me. One of the people who read my paper said they would like me to go more in depth about details I have in the writing like describing the main points that I mention. I believe that that is very helpful advice and will let me be more freer in my writing because I did not know if I should push myself farther.
I will definitely add more detail to the paper so that whoever reads it gets a better understanding of it. Finally, the key points that I wanted the reader to get out of the story, they found it. I wanted them to know why this story was meaningful to me and why I love to tell people about because it is so close to my heart.
I can't wait to see everyone in class soon and I hope you have a good weekend and a great Monday.
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